NaPoWriMo 2014 Post # 8 Lamenting

I almost forgot about today’s NaPoWriMo post, the challenge was to rewrite a famous poem. I’ve selected Federico García Lorca’s “Weeping” to be “re-written”.

Weeping by Federico García Lorca

I go down the street
Grotesque, without solution
With the sadness of Cyrano
And Quixote.

Infinite impossiblities
With the rhythm of the clock.


I trudged along the serpentine path
Enervated, bereft of clarifications
With the melancholia of Hamlet
And Helena

Profound hopelessness
With the certainty of every sunset.


4 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo 2014 Post # 8 Lamenting

  1. Awesome re-write! I’ve been so glad to see your poems again this year.

  2. I like thiws very much

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